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ATTACHMENT A <br /> Marley Cooling Tower Company <br /> June 14 , 1988 <br /> Page 1. Paragraph 1, first sentence; <br /> The Community Relations Plan (CRP) should function as <br /> a detailed work plan and not as a general description <br /> of proposed work. Therefore, the statement " . . . and <br /> proposed community relations activities. . . " should be <br /> changed to " . .and outlines, details and explains <br /> community relations activities. . . " <br /> (underlined section signifies change required) <br /> Figure 1. The map presented in Figure 1 is of unacceptable <br /> quality. Please provide a figure which clearly <br /> identifies the site location. <br /> Page 2 . First paragraph; <br /> Add description of what a retort is and its use in <br /> treating wood products. <br /> Page 2 Last paragraph; <br /> The discussion is confusing, please edit for <br /> clarification. Note too the typographical error- <br /> "report pit" . <br /> Page 3 . First paragraph; <br /> The description is too technical for a community <br /> relations plan. Please revise to inform a <br /> non-technical audience. <br /> In addition, please reference the Department of Health <br /> Services as "DHS" rather than "DOHS" . <br /> Page 3 Second paragraph; <br /> Please discuss the subsequent action taken regarding <br /> the contamination of California Water Services ` well. <br /> In addition, the paragraph should be re-written to <br /> inform a non-technical audience. For example, a <br /> definition of what "ppm" means would assist readers in <br /> understanding the information presented. An <br /> elaboration of MCLS and drinki ��ra1a �ds <br /> would also help. <br /> JUN 1G 1988 <br /> ENVIROMENTAL HEALTH <br /> PERMIT/SERVICES <br />